Thanks for reading my portfolio!! Please comment on these questions down below.
- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
I like the coming of age essay the best because you put a lot of feeling into the essay and how you grew as a person when we moved to Hawaii. I liked how you were organized and how you put little clips of your work on the side. I would like to see you improve on your spelling and time management. I think you were the most successful in the voice part because you out a lot of feeling into those pieces of work and your voice came through. I think you need to improve on the word choice. Other then that good job:)
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