Book
I am a book
Showing my story to many
I have different varieties
Up on the shelf
Living life amongst the others
Competing for that one spot
To hear me.
Hearing my story
Helping you escape the reality
Of the life that you have once lived
Wishing it was not a fantasy
To good to be true
Teaching you lessons,
I have learned from my past
I feel so wise
But then I realise that's my prize
Books have different covers
Some old some new
Some colorful or dull
Books are fragile
But once it's ruined,
They never go back to what it once was.
Books are unique
They are one of a kind
Your poem is descriptive and sounds nice altogether. You may want to put in more punctuation though. Like either have all punctuation through out the poem or none at all so that it matches. Over all it was good though
ReplyDeleteGREAT START. YOU MIGHT WANT TO THINK ABOUT EXPLAINING WHY YOU ARE THE WAY YOU ARE, WHY DO YOU COMPETE FOR THE SPOT, IS IT BECAUSE YOU ARE SHY? EXPLAIN A BIT MORE ON EVERYTHING AND YOUR POEM SHOULD BE GREAT! MS(3+)
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you were able to describe your poem metaphor and compare it too you. The only thing I think you can improve on is maybe describing more of you and putting it all together. If you have the equal amounts of descriptions of you and a book and youre able to put it all together, then it can make your poem a lot more effective.
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